Thread:Rie Kirisaki/@comment-25095137-20161102032334/@comment-26513174-20161102233303

It is really great! ^^

thank you so much~! but i apologize about yesterday, i had to leave so quickly.

Anyway i found few things i made in the original story that doesn't make sense.

and had to be fixed in the first place which is my fault T_T. like "and she could not talk to her friends." because if Ai could make friends, other won't have a problem with it. so >.< i think you remove it or change it to "And more people started hating her" or something..

And "She ended up in an alternate world that had monsters that raped people," you can remove it. because, it really doesn't have to be the monster-girls world. or monsters raping people XD. you can simply remove it or just say, "she found herself in a new world" or something ^^

and the very last thing is "looking for the one person that could love her for who she was be it male or female" well, due to the curse, she will have multiple lovers/wives/husbands. she also started liking all genders.

thats all really ^^ the whole story is perfect and i really like it! AND, i'll put your name bellow as a "thank" to you ^^